Lolly, Get Your Adverbs Here

I can write dialogue all day long, but descriptors of scenes – not so much. I wish I could more easily string adjectives and adverbs together, producing such beautiful prose that sweeps you away into a mesmerizing, captivating, spellbinding experience like F. Scott Fitzgerald or Wally Lamb.

There’s nothing like getting lost in a good story, and that’s my desire for you as I write.

So, once again, I need your help. How would you describe this scene? And GO!